The entire thing, just: damn! Oh, and excellent choice of opening music!
1) i like cats already, so i had a field day
2) SMOOTHEST. ANIMATION. EVER.
So... It's a Big Kirb & Rina Bash...
If you're that against their style, Good-God, man! How can you even call this better?
-More focused on Kirb & Rina
-an actual lack of "funnies"
How to fix:
-a sense of humor
[<Insert Coin to Continue> 0/2]
Man we relly gotta calm down on our conceitedness!
This is simple Japanese that is well executed in instruction. I've had the equivalence of 5 years of educational Japanese during high school and this is both accurate and easy to understand (ah, when things were only in romaji). I'd be happy to help with a writing section if you need/want any.
Back to the review...
I think you provided just enough background so it wouldn't take much to pick up pronunciation in Section 1 and the application of such is clear in Section 2, as in it's well explained. You might consider putting hiragana, katakana, and kanji (especially kanji) in their own respective episodes depending on how much you want to cover! And definitely consider adding more sound files ;)
4.5/5 since it isn't quite done, but you keep going! You've got a foundation for something good.
Concept = simple = great
Controls = simple = great
Difficulty = not stupid = great
art = original = great
music = not annoying = great
duration = lacking = enjoyed what I got, but half a sandwich isn't a whole sandwich.
This game is great in every way except the length. I read you're making a longer version... great! When it takes more than 60 seconds to 100% clear it, 5 stars for you. Great work; keep it up!
The music is fitting, the sound effects are fitting, the voice is fitting, the art is simple and effective, the mechanics are simple and effective (and fun to watch); the game is simple. Everything a perfect pick-up-and-play game should be. Excellent work.
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