So... It's a Big Kirb & Rina Bash...
If you're that against their style, Good-God, man! How can you even call this better?
Problems:
-Poorly animated
-More focused on Kirb & Rina
-an actual lack of "funnies"
How to fix:
-effort
-less conceitedness
-a sense of humor
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